Thursday, October 15, 2009

Chapter 10 New Life Begins

Michael stayed at home for a week, for a restful week. The circus’ burnt has considered an accident, and now the new tent is building. He can go back to work after this weekend, after this crazy week.

Nina and Jonathan Riddleman were both arrested by criminal of fraud and indirectly murder, which frightened Michael Deschain and caused George Walsh’s death. The ring was taken by the police just for these days, and it will be returned to Michael when the trial sends Nina and Jon into jail. Also because of Michael has got life frightened, he got pretty much insurance money for that. He wants to get a new car, to replace Mint, which is the broken car that staying at Michael’s garage.

The ring was a marvelous piece of jewelry, with diamonds and ruby on it, peaceful and beautiful. In 1880s, it has been added some kind of false magic by some “magicians”, said that it could get power of the sun and took away people’s luck. Minerva Deschain got the ring and buried it in a case because she doesn’t want to see people’s luck has been taken away. Minerva recorded the whole thing in her journal, which Nina Riddleman found and read it, she researched about it, and wanted to get the ring by using her only great-grandson.

Michael wants to give the ring to the world by putting it into an auction. That is a good way for both the ring and Michael, and Michael will get away from bad luck, live and have a better live in the future.

The sun still rises. It rises for every human being.

The End

Monday, October 12, 2009

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Chapter 9 The Forgotten Ring

Half an hour later, Jon arrived and picked Michael and Nina up, Mint was dead and parked by the road, and the engine was already not working. Michael was pretty upset about his car, he didn’t even know why did he drive so fast. Mint will be on the truck until it gets fixed.
Jon was putting Mint in his truck. “Nina!” He called. Nina came over, carefully, made sure that Michael was not looking at her, and took the gun from his father. Michael didn’t see her at that time, and he didn’t know their plan.
Briefly, they arrived into the Winslet Palace, which is a cave. Michael felt very well today, he’s just going in to this place, get his great grandmother’s ring, and decide what to do next. He didn’t even get a brain message after sitting on the truck. And also, he is prepared. He even brought his own pistol because yesterday George king really terrified him. He didn’t even know what was wrong with him. But he has confidence, he lost his job the day before yesterday, but he is now sure the job will come back to him right after this has done.
But he didn’t tell anyone that he brought his gun. Every step you take would be your biggest victory. Michael was so confident for that.

It was a deserted place with some trash that didn’t clean after construction. Nobody was here. Followed the map, they found a box on the ground quickly; Michael crouched down and opened it, saw a black jewelry box with a name on it. Minerva Deschain.

Here we go, Nina thought. Nina was the most nervous in them three, nobody knows her plan.
Michael opened the smaller box. The ring was right there with a Glad plastic wrap on it. Nina pulled out the pistol at the moment that she saw the ring safe. “Hands up! Stand up right there and don’t move!” Michael thought, that was what I want for exciting myself. He pulled his pistol out at the almost same time that Nina shouted out, and fired it.


An hour later, the police came and took away Nina and Jon, Jon had no gun, Michael knocked him down instead of shooting him. Nina was shot in right arm. Michael’s such a good shooter! Michael went to police office for statement, with his great grandmother’s ring.